Monday, November 22, 2010

Blog #7

Humor to me is things that make laugh or watching funny movies with my family. When I am having a bad day my brother can always make me laugh and make me feel better. My brother can be very funny. No, I though the cocaine dealer was an idiot and not funny at all.
When I think of style, I think of fashion and what kinds of style there is in clothing. Or what kind of style does not person have.

Wednesday, November 3, 2010

Blog #6: Critical Analyses Reflection

I am sorry it is late. I realize after the due date that we had to blog and have been busy to blog.
The critical analyses were on “beautiful Girls.”  I found that boys are so immature in this movie and need to just grow up. I thought my critical analyses did not turn out great. First of all I did not know what to write about. I did not like the movie. I was confused on which format to use and how to cite it the right way. I know will fix the paper because I did not like my grade.  I made some stupid mistakes. I should have read it before turning it. I felt like I just type bunch of words to fill the pages. But again it did not know if I was really even writing the paper the right way. I guess need to critique the movie more. I feel like I am always behind or doing things last minute.
            My goal is to fix the paper and makes it flow better. I will fix the cite stuff. I will critique more of the movie. I try to fix all my grammatical errors. I hoping the next revision I turn in, I will get better grade. I will try to not summarize the movie. I also need to just statement my opinion and explain it and move on. I need not to be afraid to say it. And I am going to try to add that is the revision draft.
            Overall my paper needs work and I will fix it!!