Sunday, October 17, 2010

Blog #5

I don’t remember much about the Evaluative Summary paper.  It is hard to blog about this when I don’t have the paper and I can look at my mistakes. And I did also did not realize we had to revise this paper and turn it back in.  I was not sure I did this paper right.  But I am hoping did. But I try to show my opinion and the author’s opinion. I also tried to back it with information from the article. I know use is, are, was, were, and am. I really don’t understand why we cannot use them in a paper. It is hard for me not to use them. My English 101 teacher tried to explain it, but I did not get. Maybe you could explain to me? I also was in hurry to get this assignment done and I was more worry about getting two pages worth. I found this topic sorted of interesting and boring.
            I really don’t know to make this paper better. But I will try to change the verbs is, are, was, were, and am. And I will other corrections if necessary. I will also refer to the book for guides on picking the right verbs to use.
            I really don’t like fixing paper over and over. And I really hate writing papers. If the revisions are due on October 19, 2010, how are we turning them into when we don’t have class? Are we e-mailing them to you or blogging them?? I just was wondering!

Monday, October 11, 2010

Blog #4: Research Paper free Write

My family is most important to me. My family comes first in my life. We love watching sports and movies together. Some shows we watch together are Survivor, Amazing Race, Biggest Loser, CSI’s, and The Doctors. Eating dinner with my family is important because we talk about our day at school, work, and life. Next to that my cat is very important to me. Patches needs lots of care. He is diabetic and needs shots. I petty much take care of him because he is my cat.
                I loved dancing and took dance classes. I took ballet, tap, and Pointe. (And I don’t want to write about this). I loved reading when I get a chance. I loved reading romance novels and mysteries. I don’t play sports and I am not in any clubs. I also like playing on facebook. I am currently going to school full time and working a lot. No time for extra activities.  I like to listen to music on my iPod music. I love animals especially cats, dogs, and monkeys.
I don’t watch the news and don’t want to watch the news because it is boring and depressing. The only time I hear the news is on the radio. A lot of times I am switching stations because I want to hear music not people talking.
                Some other shows I like to show are Teen Mom, 16 and Pregnant, Keeping Up with Kardashians, Kate plus 8, Kendra, Paula Dean, and Quints by Surprise.
                Recently I am interested in caking decorating. My grandma used to do cake decorating and has taught me some tips. She even gave me her cake decorating supplies. I would love to learn more about cake decorating and take a class on it. I am not very good but, my grandma said I just need practice and I am doing well as a beginner. My mom said she would take a cake decorating class with me.